Monday, April 7, 2008

Ace

Our family pets name is ace
It seems as if he is always in space
He is our dog and of course we love him
But nobody can resist so we get down to hug him.
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Jack Sullivan said...

change as "if he is" to " he is "

Dont use but at the begginin of line 4

it shud read" Nobody can resist to get down and hug him"

good job

April 8, 2008 at 8:21 AM

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