revised remembrance poem

We remember the bullets shadowing over us

We remember reusing the dull tipped needles

We remember sleeping in dirty, watery trenches

We remember having no change of clothes

We remember the seasickness of the rocking back and forth.

We remember running from the boats to the beach

We remember using men as body armor

We remember them doing all of this for us

They fought for us

They died for us

And we remember

Punctuate it!

my name is marco and i have three posts about three different things a cow a remembrance poem and a peom about temagami my web address is called mdp232blogspotcom i think that my best poem is the remembrance poem

What am I

I drink milk for weeks

Gaining a pound a day

I am aching in my feet

Now I am at 500 pounds

20 feels like only an ounce

I sit and eat grass all day

Doing nothing eating mostly hay

Things come over and tip me at night

Sometimes we will get in a fight

My friend has gone into the barn

Hasn’t come back

Now he is in pieces on a rack

Temagami

I wake up into the morning sun.

Knowing that the day has just begun.

When I see the birds flying high.

I know that everything is going to be all right

To only think in the now and not the when

Lifting hard, passing trails

Pitching tents, packing bags

Passing by the Lilly pads below

We seek the next break.

Remembrance

We remember the bullets shadowing over us

We remember reusing the dull tipped needles

We remember sleeping in dirty, watery trenches

We remember no change of clothes

We remember the seasickness of the rocking back and forth.

We remember running from the boats to the beach

We remember using men as body armor

We remember them doing all of this for us